Exhibition Review
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Based on what I read, here is what you need to change to get full credit: Describe the specific aspects of the exhibition: what were the objects on display? What were the activities available at the exhibition? You need to reference to the Cramsie reading in the paper, perhaps to something in the art of war chapter (I think that is Ch. 15?), or any other connection you can think of. You need to reference at least one other outside source. Both the Cramsie and the other outside source need to be in a bibliography at the end of your paper. Please have someone work with you on the writing portion so that it makes clear sense to the reader. Much of what was taken off points-wise is because of language - do you have someone who could help you with this? Please at least have someone proofread your paper, if not also help you with the writing part. I'm not sure if the writing center is open on the last day of the quarter, but it would be worth checking out.Do your best to add in these things (a proofread paper, a bibliography, a reference to Cramsie and an outside source, and a clear description of the exhibition). Let me know if you have any questions.
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